ਚੋਰ ਬੱਚਾ (ਖੁਦ ਨਾਲ ਗੱਲਾਂ)

well done Balkrn 👍👍 M proud of u my Dear.....for the very First time today i saw the topics which this App gives to all Writers nd i read few of them....but, the way you wrote this topic -ਖੁਦ ਨਾਲ ਗੱਲਾਂ it's totally different nd really appreciable👍.....Excellent Poem is also Superb showing Pain nd Emotions..!! nd yes it is a sad reality of our society that these kind of things are happening around us...!!

bht vdiya subject te likhi tuc story !! really appreciable ! its a bitter truth of our society ! i literally felt the pain of that little boy 😔 the way you wrote it really commendable !! well done nd thanks for letting us read one of ur best story !! poem v bht vdiya likhi a tuc !! una bchya de dil de darda nu byaan krdi hoyi !!

Vry well written, 👍👍u shuld end all this, only then the country will improve, this topic shuld be written on the top of all the different ones, this is the identity of a great writer.👏👏 nice poem dear